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                I am a writer, a creator of stories, but I am also a reader.  I prefer to write stories I enjoy, but that is not always the case, sometimes I must write for others. This means that I write what I think will be the most enjoyable by those who read them. Preferably, I enjoy writing fiction, especially longer, fantasy novels. But more recently, I have found that I am writing more and more poetry, which I have found to be very enjoyable for not only myself but have also for the readers.

As far as short stories go, I have found that I have struggled a bit, especially with story, character development in a short timeframe and such. The reason behind me taking English 2270 was for me to learn how to write better forms of fiction. As it says in the course objectives, I was able to improve my writing skills in fiction, such as writing and revising mine and other’s works.

The course has also helped me fulfil some of the SLCC Learning Outcomes by helping me engage in reflective thinking and expression, developing critical literacies, and to gain a better understanding of and an appreciation for human differences. I will now be able to use these skills in my future course by being able to critically think and revise my works and assignments to better fulfil the requirements for each assignment.

English 2270

Intro to Fiction

This is a story I had written for this class

The Change

                I crawled out from Wakon’s overturned Jeep. I checked myself for any injuries then immediately searched for Wakon. As the Jeep veered and rolled off the road in the explosion, he was ejected. I really hoped he was alright. I ran to the front of the Jeep and found him crawling out; his normally smooth skin covered in his blood.

                “Wakon, are you okay?” I hurried to him and helped him back to his feet.

                “No, is my Jeep alright?” He scoffed at his flipped car.

                I searched around the wreckage of cars, “What happened?”

                Wakon walked next to me and scanned the buildings for a moment and ran his hand through his hair, “Kaz, I need to find Lenda.”

                “Wakon, you find Lenda and get back to somewhere you will be safe.” I looked around the debris, “Go to the campus, we’ll meet you there.”

                Wakon nodded and I watched him run off toward the police station. I looked over the street; many people were crawling out from their cars and running from where the explosion had come from. As I walked back to the Jeep, I heard loud gunshots ring in the air in rapid succession. I ducked behind the Jeep and peeked my head out and watched men walk down the street, shooting at everyone they saw.

                The group worked their way down the street and suddenly they were shooting at a few local police. Some of the men fell to the gunfire as they fired back but they eventually mowed down the police. I kept my head behind Wakon’s Jeep and watched the two forces face each other.  I held my arms close to my chest and tried to keep myself calm and focused on finding my friends.

                After what could’ve been a few minutes or a couple hours, it was hard to tell with all the hectic gunfire and yelling, the area grew quiet. I poked my head out and saw no one moving around. I looked around the street; dead bodies covered the road and sidewalk, some with bullet wounds, others torn apart from the explosion. Next to a shot cop, I saw a rifle. “It could be useful… Maybe.” I shook my head at the thought, “I’ve never used a gun, let alone a rifle. I’d shoot my own foot before anyone else.”

I walked further down the street, noticing a small doll on the sidewalk next to a small pool of blood. I picked her up and sighed, there was blood splattered on the cloth face and neat blue dress. “The owner had no idea that this was going to happen. They must’ve been hit during the gunfire or explosion and were taken by their parents, since there was no girl to be found among the bodies.”

I stared at the doll for a minute or two, thinking of my own sister, Lenda. “She’s always been tougher than me, she never played with dolls, much rather have her ‘adventures’, not surprised when she went into the police.

It was then that it hit me, “Lenda would’ve had to face these people too.” I tightened my grip on the doll as tears fell from my face from the thought. “Not even sure why or who we were facing. Some of my friends hopefully made it okay. I just had to find Aria.”

Walking down the street, I stopped and noticed the line of troops heading toward me. I quickly ducked behind the Jeep to hide from them. “More of those who were shooting up the street, Light, I’m going to die.” Looking around, I saw the discarded rifle by Wakon’s jeep again. “Should I fight? I’ve never used a gun before… Would it do any good?” Before I could think further, the footsteps grew louder. I grabbed the rifle, pressed myself against the jeep, took a shaky aim and fired at the men.

I kept firing, if I stopped, I was good as dead. “Why!? Why did you do this?” My body began to feel colder, my arm and chest felt wet, yet warm. I was dying. In the blink of an eye, I was staring at the sky, struggling to breathe. My final thoughts seemed shallow, “How did this all happen?”

***

I held Aria close as we danced together, Aria’s long silver dress flowing with each turn. Her long, brown hair braided and resting on her shoulder; her pale white skin glistened slightly with sweat. Her soft face brightened greatly with her ever increasing smile.

My dark grey suit made my brown skin seem darker and almost mixed with it. My short black hair combed forward for once and slightly spiked. I spun Aria around then pull her in close for a hug. As she looked up at me, I slowly pressed my lips to hers. I could feel her pressing back slowly. After a moment I pulled away. Both of us were breathing heavily now, but our smiles made up for however tired we had become.

“I love you.” I could see her begin to blush. The foundation did not hide it well; the heat of my own face told me I was also. “I love you with all my heart and there is nothing that will change that.” I held her close and kissed her forehead.

Her hand stayed on my cheek as she began to tear up, “I love you too, Kazzel. No one can deny my love for you.” She brushed my lips with a kiss before clinging to my chest and resting her head on my shoulder.

I could feel myself getting choked up, “Aria, will you marry me?” Her ears flicked as her head lifted slowly, and my heart raced as she turned to look me in the eyes. He smile never faltered, “Kazzel…”

 

I groaned heavily as the alarm clock rang. I clicked the reset button and roll onto my side. Rubbing the sleep from my eyes, I slowly sat up and stretched my arms to the ceiling. Throwing my legs to the side of the bed, I ran my hands through my bed-messed hair and face. The dream always ended there, right when she’s about to respond to my question.

I pressed my hands to the bed with a sigh and pushed myself to my feet, then made my way into the bathroom to begin my regular routine before classes.

After showering and dressing, I wandered into the kitchen of my small, one bedroom apartment. I used to live in a nicer two bedroom house with my best friend, Wakon, but once he married my sister, Lenda, I felt it was a good idea to live somewhere else, despite whatever Wakon said.

I sighed as I ate my breakfast; a knock came to the door. I arose slowly and walked toward the door. After halving the distance, I stopped. My sight drifted down, checking that I had put on pants, and seeing that I had, I resumed my walking.

Before I could open the door, Wakon busted in, tackling me into a hug. “Morning Kaz!” My eyes stared slightly angrily as I frowned at him. “Guess what today is?”

I stared at him for a moment, blinking occasionally, “I don’t know, Thursday, the day of my biology exam?” He shook his head at me.

“No silly, the day I take you for some relaxation.” Wakon beamed that sentence out of himself; probably he had been trying with all his strength to keep it back. “Road trip!”

I sighed and shook my head at him, “Did you not hear me? I have an exam today. I don’t have the time to go on a road trip.”

Wakon grabbed my arm and pulled me out of the door. “Trust me, it’ll be fine.” Wakon stuffed me into his Jeep and got into the driver seat. “We’re going to go everywhere!” He switched between the stations as he drove down the street to the freeway.

This is a meta-fiction I had written for this class

Leaving

                Len-Zhao ran his hand through his hair, shuffling his feet slightly as he tried to look into Tren-La’s eyes. “Right, right. You remember how I said I was posted on the front, but they sent me here for recovery?” He rubbed his arm slowly as the two sat by the street on a bench at night.

                Okay, don’t think too hard about what is happening. The question Len-Zhao asked never ends well. Wording it like this in any writing basically is asking for tension. You try being in a conversation with someone when they say this and not become tense. But its tension that really moves a story along. You can always use tension to help a story.

                Tren-La nodded slowly, not sure of what her love was trying to say, her hair fell in front of her face as she moves. Her long black braid moving to the front of her shoulder. “Yes…” She looked up into his eyes, the moonlight catching in her eyes, making them shine against the darkness outside of the streetlamp.

                He took a long, deep breath, “I am… to return soon. I… did not stand up to my superiors for a chance to be one of the few on leave for recovery to… Not return.” He rubbed his hands together flatly, his eyes down on the stone tiles beneath their feet. “I can’t see myself returning again unless I sustain injuries like before.”

                And that’s where it hits. You know that she can’t truly stop him from leaving, but you also know that she will try her best to stop him regardless. It’s how we function as humans and humans in literature tend to be the same, unless you’re writing a heavily fictional story, which can make people do some really crazy things. Anyway, this kind of scene will usually go the same way.

                She sighed softly, folding her arms under her breasts to hold herself still. She slowly looked into the night sky, “If… you need to go, Dear, go. I’ll be fine here… China is a safe place.”

                Usually, but not always. It seems I wanted to try something different. But I have to be careful, trying new things doesn’t always end well. I might not know how to resolve the crisis correctly, but I will definitely try my best.

                Len-Zhao frowned heavily, he heard the shakiness in her tone and sighed also. “It’s hard to think of what to say. I had spoken of my post prior, at least as far as I recall.

                She nodded slowly, “You had… but I didn’t think… you’d go back… “

                “I… well, all wounds heal. Mine have started to get to the point where I’m not as weak, and I have a duty to fulfill.” He couldn’t help but let out a weak huff of laughter in the slightest of manners. He rubbed his chin slowly.

                “When do you leave?”

                “This weekend, maybe today, or tomorrow.”

                “And you’ll probably be gone until the war is over….”

                “Most likely.”

                Tren-La tried to collect herself, her body shaking despite her holding herself, and her voice twice so. “Go… go, do your duty. I’ll be fine here.”

                Len-Zhao reached over to slide a hand on her back gently before taking a deep breath, “I have time before I must make preparations. We can spend it together if you’d like.”

                She clung to him, her arms wrapped around his torso, “I’d like that.”

                One last night together, neither of them knows if they will see each other again, but for them and many of us at times, we don’t care what will happen next. We only focus on the moment and wish that it will never end. But just like in reality, our characters must move on, the plot must continue so the resolution can come for them, whether it’s good or bad.

                He turned toward her, wrapping both arms around her in a hug. He leaned down to rest his head on hers gently.

                Tren-La looked up at him slowly, “Len-Zhao?”

                “Yes, Tren-La?”

                “You know I love you, right?”

                “I know, Tren-La, I know.”

                “I… don’t ever want you to forget it, okay?” She squeezed him slightly, hearing him chuckle lightly before she continued, “Remember who’s waiting for you to come home.”

                Love, true love.

                “There are letters I can write to you every week, they have a delivery. I can get them to you. If… you’d like that…”

                “I’d… that’d… please do. And I’ll reply back to every single one.”

                “The land I will be on is… different than ours. Days are different, time as well. I will have a letter sent to you at some point in the following week. And the day it arrives, expect one the same day every week.”

                “Okay… and you expect the same from me, alright?”

                Len-Zhao gave her a squeeze, placing a gentle kiss on her forehead. He sighed, and pulled her close in a tight embrace. “I will …and Tren-La?”

                Tren-La clung to him as she could, “Yes, Len-Zhao?”

                “Have faith in me, and know that danger is the lifeblood of this new land. If I don’t reply to you after the first time, I beg you do not expect the worst. Have patience. I fight with might of our country, and my allies. I will not fall.”

                Sometimes statements like these will tear your heart out later, when you learn that he died in battle before he could see her face one last time, or perhaps he meets a woman in this new land and falls in love with her and leaves the woman he promised himself to.

                Tren-La smiled and lightly kissed his chin, “I surely hope you don’t, or I’ll have to kill every last American I see.”

                Len-Zhao sighed softly, “If I do die over there, I don’t want you to let my death bring you to slaughter, Tren-La. That is not our way. Remember that.”

                She nodded slowly, “Okay, I will try, but you better not go and get killed just to test me.”

                Len-Zhao held Tren-La close in his arms as they sat under the streetlight.

For this story, when I was writing it, I was never able to fully get out what I wanted to have the characters do; I was trying to have Kazzel have an internal conflict with a small to fight back, but not knowing how to. When we were asked to ‘destroy’ the story to revise it, I saw that by moving certain parts around and by changing the scene slightly, I could finally accomplish this task.

One of the biggest pieces of feedbacks I took in with my revising was clearing up the timeline/scenes. I had felt that I had left it a bit confusing in my draft, and after hearing that I had from other people, I knew what I had to do. I also worked most of the dialogue to sound more fluid and fitting to the story taking place.

I feel that what this piece and it’s revision process say about me as a writer is that I have a hard time understanding what is wrong with my own works and that when other read and give me feedback, it is much easier for me to understand what I need to change. I think that after revising and listening to the feedback I received, the dialogue is much more fluid and tells more story, the characters are more detailed in the way I wanted, and that the plot flows more in the direction I had imagined.

For the Meta-fiction, I had chosen this piece over the third story we had written in the course because I honestly liked this one more that the fairy tale. For the revision portion of this piece, I worked on the scene and really putting the two characters into it. I worked on what the narrator/author is saying during his portions to make it more clear, and I helped readers understand what was going on in the story.

I feel that this story really shows that I am able to write different kinds of fiction, not just my usual adventure/action stories I like to write, and in this way I feel highly that this piece was successful.

So what’s next for me, you may ask. Well I definitely plan on writing more of my novel, which I hope to publish by the end of 2017, and to do this I will write at least one chapter a week, until I finish the story then go through and revise it into the story I want to tell. I will continue to write poems and possibly more short stories, as they come to my mind and creativity.

I will continue reading whatever I feel like reading, but first I will finish Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time series, because I really love the series. I hope to finish the series by the time I publish my novel, but with the rate I’m currently reading, because I love the books so much, it may take me a bit longer.

I am a writer, whether it’s poetry, novels, or short stories. I will continue to write whatever others tell me. I love to write, I love to read, and that will never stop.

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